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The Rainbow

Colors of course, 6 not 7 as it once was,
Indigo no longer one of the colors mentioned
But still found hidden in a 64 pack of Crayola crayons.  

A plethora of combinations and of pigments,
But still they all come from the same three primary.
Mix them and you get the whole rainbow.

3 for 3,
Three colors make three more colors.
Red, Yellow, Blue make Orange, Green, Violet.

A happy person likes a colorful arrangement,
Jumble the arrangement,
Many a person will be confused.

The artist, the gay person, the rainbow enthusiast,
All will be confused, disgruntled
If their rainbow is out of order.

I like to think I’m a colorful person,
A rainbow enthusiast so to speak, my left hand loves a good box of Crayola colored pencils and white paper.  
I am one to whom the order is important.

The rainbow in the sky, colorful, in order,
Cloudy, yet sunny, the sky welcomes it on a gloomy day,
To help the sun keep the rain clouds at bay.

Though there are many in the sky at once,
We see them only on those few occasions,
When the sun shines during a storm.

The rainbow, symbol of peace,
The symbol of pride in one's homosexuality,
And in the form of a circle, the symbol of the artist.

To me the rainbow is the symbol of my love,
No obsession,
For colors, randomness, and for my strive to be individualistic.
©2008-2009 ~amenafaye
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Author's Comments

"I'm not gay, I just really love Rainbows" I got that off a bumper sticker...

I truly do love rainbows tho...

I know it's been awhile since I wrote something... I don't think I've ever written something that could be called 'good', but that's a matter of opinion... what do u think?

(The reason also that my left hand likes the pencils is cause I'm left handed... if you needed clarification...)

I hope you like it... Comments and Critique are welcome...

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Woot - 1st comment! (Of course.) Well you already know that O love th epoem since I told you about a million times already...lol! "Ones" should be changed to "one's" though. I'm glad that you didn't make it rhyme - it gives it more of a serious feel. A rhymed poem about the rainbow would have sounded more immature. I also like how you worded some things slightly abnormally though still grammatically correct. This gives it more of a poemy (yeah, I know thats now a word - but it should be..) feel. Love it! Now I need to figure out what I'M gonna do for my free write....

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"Reach out and open the door that no one thought could be opened. Life is behind it! We don't have an eternity to realize our dreams, only the time we are here. If you risk nothing, then you risk everything."

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